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Smoke

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I dream of fire
Those dreams are tied to a horse that will never tire
And in the flames
Her shadows play in the shape of a man's desire

This desert rose
Each of her veils, a secret promise
This desert flower
No sweet perfume ever tortured me more than this


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Image size
2448x3264px 1.2 MB
Make
Panasonic
Model
DMC-FZ30
Shutter Speed
10/150 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
7 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Oct 2, 2009, 8:09:22 PM
Mature
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Overall a good piece. I lighting is a bit weird between the bed and the model. It makes her skin look weird. The contrast between the lights and darks are perfect and the shadows really add to the photo. Keeping the bra shows enough without showing too much. The photo really gives a feeling of wanting to be desired and a bit of loneliness. Loneliness because of the empty bed and the expression on her face. Wanting to be desired because of the bed and of course what she is wearing. The only negative thing I have to say is really the lighting.